Posted by: inzwakazi | October 25, 2012

I wanted…

i said i wanted

the moon and the stars

i said i want

the galaxies

all but no less

i opened myself up

for greatness so big

did not care about

the prize, the price

did not see

that to gain

you have to lose

i wanted

i am getting

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Responses

  1. Very good. ‘Lose’ not loose. It loses one ‘o’.

    • Thanks Adee. I do this all the time.


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